Letting You Go

Letting You Go

A Poem by SimplyOlivia

They still walk around

Like the happy couple

I won't lie

To you

Or myself:

I'm jealous

We used to be happy

Just like that

And honestly.

I miss it

I'm happy where I am

But you just HAD

To pop into life again

Part of me is so angry with you for that

It brings back all the memories

And me

Being faulted and human

Holds onto those memories

And wishes I could have them

*sighs*

But slowly I suppose

I'm letting go

Letting you go

© 2012 SimplyOlivia


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A poem written in an order contained much feelings that comes from the heart. I liked this write, words're powerful and this piece's contained much RHYME and i loved this. Your ending's beautiful and well penned. Our Heart always looking for expensive, shining and stunning things which provide some enjoy, relaxation ... this write's all about true heart feelings which're now converted into memories. A true Heartfelt write you made, I liked this write much. Keep writing. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this poem so much because I can definitely relate. You organized the lines perfectly! Sometimes with prose poems, the lines can be awkward if there are too many words/syllables but this was perfectly done! Amazing write! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


There is power and feeling here. I love this idea for a write. You show restraint here too and that is unsual.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Some say Life itself is the art of letting go

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes...absolutely get it. The memories tear at your heart and make it hard to forget and move on. This really touched me. Thanks for posting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The part "I'm happy where I am...Part of me is so angry with you for that" is absolutely incredible. The ending sounds very real. Really well-done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely write!

Posted 12 Years Ago



Revolving romance...vexing both ways. Letting go never comes easy while the good memories are still alive...

Well written...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes we have to let go.....Good write.......Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago


Pursuing Olivia right through her dreams of
realiity and into the world of poetry where
she has me by the ear and the nose and she has
my eyes riveted to her being of love and nostalgia.
I find her , as I did in the beginning, a hypnotic writer,
who moves words before my eyes and for some reason
I fall into a trance where there is not enough, I need more
of this beautiful talented writing, now .
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 28, 2012
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SimplyOlivia
SimplyOlivia

Chattanooga, TN



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Sometimes, people say to describe yourself in one word. My word is interesting. I am like a diamond, multi-faceted but still see-through but beautiful to look at and desired, not to mention expensive... more..

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