Been There Done That

Been There Done That

A Poem by SimplyOlivia
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Inspired by the song by Luke Bryan

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I'm happy

You're happy.

So why do I exprect

Everything to be the same

It's been over a month

Since we last talked

Then you popped into my life

That was dramatic

Looking at everything....

I realize how much has changed

So why do I exprect

Everything to be the same

I expected you...

I expected the same

I expected you to still be mine

As if things had never changed

Silly me

How could I think such things

But I still don't like it.

I don't like how you've changed.

I despise it!!!!!

You aren't the one I fell in love with

You are'nt the same

I want the old you back

You're a totally different person

I don't like it.

Not one bit.

 



"I ain't, I ain't coming back
I've already been there, done that
And I'm done with you messing with my mind
The last times, the last time baby
I can only change who I am so much and all I can give is all my love
And my love ain't never been enough
So I ain't coming back
I've already been there, done that"

© 2012 SimplyOlivia


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That's an amazing write you written. I've read that you inspired by a song and now i wanna appreciate this write you made in your own ways... in your own words. All lines're beautiful it's really a nice song.. a heartfelt song you made. Your starting's awesome and your flow seemed damn good and brilliant in the last one stanza as well. This write forces me to drop my alll writes again on the site that i've deleted. You inspired by 'LUKE' and i think i inspired by you and of course by your words you use in this write. Keep writing, i enjoyed reading this piece. Great job once again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Affects me very much :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


Never scorn a good woman's pure, passionate love . . . it'll always come back and blind-side you with a vengeance. And possibly land you in the ER. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful. I understand. Damn! Why do people do this to us? Pop up when we've just started to heal and move on and then rip our heart in two and act differently. And our love is never enough. Thank you for putting these feelings into words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You did it and that`s enough.
Rather biting placement of the
other party which he probably
deserves.
Good work, well written and executed.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


It was two poems...two flows of thought... one answering the other... and it could be real... the taste is sharp.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 28, 2012
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SimplyOlivia
SimplyOlivia

Chattanooga, TN



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