Disjointed Thoughts

Disjointed Thoughts

A Poem by SimplyOlivia
"

This is literally just what was going through my mind. Boys are idiots.

"

Country music runnin’ through my ears.

Anger pourin through my veins.

These boys just wanna start s**t.

Don’t they know when to quit?!

All yall piss the f**k outta me.

What is your goddamn problem?!

Why am I the damn object of affections?

What is so damn great about me?

Please explain all this to me.

All these f*****g couples are around

It only pisses me off further.

Yes I want to be loved

But its senseless to fight over me.

F**k

Whats so damn great about me?

If I gotta sit yalls asses down I will

You damn well know it too

I like yall bein protective of me

But s**t!

I aint defenseless.

And I could kick both yalls asses for wanting to fight over me.

© 2012 SimplyOlivia


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Hmmmmm !
Good thing I read several of your stuff before this one.
You are so believeable thst I had to go back and read this
again, then discovered where you are coming from.
"Sheeeeezz, when you write it I beleive it.
This is very original and just as authentic as the others.
Great writing.
----- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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nice nice nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


hahaha..Nice! It keeps me on reading this again..and again,,100 times..hehe..nice! kicking a*s is hmmmmm..fun?haha nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The real reason men fight over women is much simpler than love, and all women know that, deep down. Men are not as emotional as women . . . they're much more . . . physically driven, if ya take my meaning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kick a*s girl! Wooo! Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmmmm !
Good thing I read several of your stuff before this one.
You are so believeable thst I had to go back and read this
again, then discovered where you are coming from.
"Sheeeeezz, when you write it I beleive it.
This is very original and just as authentic as the others.
Great writing.
----- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVE IT

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 6, 2011
Last Updated on May 20, 2012

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SimplyOlivia
SimplyOlivia

Chattanooga, TN



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Sometimes, people say to describe yourself in one word. My word is interesting. I am like a diamond, multi-faceted but still see-through but beautiful to look at and desired, not to mention expensive... more..

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