What I Want...What I Need

I wrote this in retaliation to I Want To...

Let’s escape the world

Just us two

The world doesn’t matter

If I have you

Take my heart

Take my hand

We’ll never part

We’ll lay in the sand

I’m not in a band

I so what I can

Just us two

Cause I want you

I need you

I love you

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Wow Once again your did an amazing job and you got my heart again by your flowery words. I loved this shorty write that's written in your poetic words. Yeh, you're right ... life's one and life needs love, without love there's no life and without life there's no alive. I loved this write much. Your heart was beating i think for someone when you made this cool and awesome write from your heart and converted your thoughts into expressively written words. Starting and Ending both seemed beautiful and lovely as a love. Love's a common word but it plays a deep role in our life indeed, love hurts but it spreads love. I think you're thinking about love's nice, beautiful, warm, creative and of course amazing. I enjoyed this write and made some views as a characters in my mind again through your this awesome write 'Olivia' ;) You're not gonna become my fav. writer ;)