What's The Point?

What's The Point?

A Poem by SimplyOlivia
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Last french class

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Glares and stares throughout the class

Usually an enjoyed class

But now a personal hell

They still love each other

Even though

They know it’s over

I t kills me inside

Though I know it shouldn’t

I am dramatic

But that’s how I feel

He read her

And everything she writes

I write as well

But I don’t matter

I never have

I never will

It’s just better to forget it

And die in unrest

© 2010 SimplyOlivia


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I write as well

But I don’t matter

I never have

I never will

It’s just better to forget it

And die in unrest....

Again a true shorty write above love you dropped by. It's an awesome write which expressed the depth of the write in poetic words. The above one last few lines're so powerful and totally touched my heart. Your writes're real and so passionable about love. I'm sure you've got a big experience of/from life. You've got even a great talent of writing. So, keep writing, I loved as well as did enjoy your stuffs.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2010
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SimplyOlivia
SimplyOlivia

Chattanooga, TN



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Sometimes, people say to describe yourself in one word. My word is interesting. I am like a diamond, multi-faceted but still see-through but beautiful to look at and desired, not to mention expensive... more..

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