Is It Wrong of Me?

Is It Wrong of Me?

A Poem by SimplyOlivia

Is it wrong of me

To make my friend suffer

When she has already caused herself pain?

Is it wrong to punish her

For being reckless

And an idiot.

I know where she is coming from

Because I walked down that road myself

Long, long ago.

So when she chooses to mutilate

Her porcelain skin,

Is it wrong of me

To cause her more physical pain

By making her swim in a pool?

She chose to tear open her flesh.

So is it wrong of me to teach her this lesson.

It’s been done before

And worked for a while.

Once every season,

She decides to fall into her old habit.

Is it wrong of me to punish and cure her?

© 2012 SimplyOlivia


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No... that's not wrong of you if you if you do that from heart ;) nice write, it's a bit emotional, but much powerful write you again made and i again read this in an evening time when it's cold wind blowing here outside. You always flatter me by your awesome heartfelt works and you did again by making this write. You know what, why i do like reading your stuffs !! Because your writes're so real, powerful, made from heart and are so adorable and i always get or know something new from your writes indeed. I appreciate your writes that you made and you've got such a nice talent to write. Keep writing 'Olivia Angel', I think you've made your career in writing's field. Great and a splendid job once again as usual dear 'Olivia' ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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SimplyOlivia
SimplyOlivia

Chattanooga, TN



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Sometimes, people say to describe yourself in one word. My word is interesting. I am like a diamond, multi-faceted but still see-through but beautiful to look at and desired, not to mention expensive... more..

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