When It Rains

When It Rains

A Poem by Luca

When It Rains.

 

I Feel The Way I Used To.

I Can See You Standing With Me.

They Thought We Were Together.

We Only Loved Like Brother And Sister.

No One Understood Us.

Why Can't You Still Be Here.

I Hate This All Without You.

I Should Have Gone With You.

 

When It Rains.

 

I Stay Out There.

Getting Sick From The Cold.

Letting My Eyes Burn.

I Just Wait For My End.

I Miss The Way We Talked.

I Would Sneak In When A Thunder Storm Came.

We Would Sit On Your Roof And Count The Stars.

When It Rained, We'd Go Dance In The Pond.

 

I Think Of You.

When It Rains.

© 2009 Luca


Author's Note

Luca
Ignore Grammer. For My Friend Again. Died Febuary 09. God, I Miss You Earl

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I feel your emotion. I'm sorry for your loss. You are very creative.

Posted 15 Years Ago


First of all I am sorry for your lost. This poem was full of emotions and sentiment. It is very difficult suffering the "lost" of a loved one. The good thing to remember though is that as long as you keep them in your heart, they will always be with you. I wish you the best in life.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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