Alittle while

Literally just wrote this so forgive the horrible structure and punctuation etc: Would take alot of time to eplain the background but if theres anything that you can't quite get, i'm happy to explain

So i've known you for alittle while
Just alittle while
You took my breathe from that first lock of brown to green
Beauty unsurpassed by anything
i thanked all my gods, every deity, every force of the world, all my ancestors
for giving me a glimpse of somthing so perfect
so imperfect and broken and lost
Broken pieces forming somthing so beautiful

We knew each other for only alittle while
we came together under the blanket
face to face in the darkness
unable to see but what a beautiful sight it was
seeing through the soul because eyes are to fragile


Guess it wasn't meant to be, or maybe it is
life is still young, yet we feel so old
we've known each other for alittle while
feels like centuries though,
haven't seen you in awhile
that feels even longer

So we're talking again, probly only for alittle while
but brown and green connecting again, i'd give it all for that
seeing without seeing in the darkness again, i'd go through hell for that

Guess for now our hearts will have to seperate, but i'll never forget about you
unspoken things may be, but we made it through this far

I love you

I'll never say it again with any meaning truer than now

I'm tired now and i need some sleep
I hope i get to dream of you

Even if its just for alittle while.

Author's Note

As said above you'll have to excuse the structure and punctuation, but please feel free to give advice on it non the less.

Reviews

[Ashley Lynn]

Very heartfelt and warm. I enjoyed reading this. I like your tone, emotion and even the structure isn't so bad. Well done. It helped remind me that all we need in life are those simple moments that may only last for just a little while.