Black Valentine

Not everyone could have a beautiful Valentine's Day

For the first morning sight
My day had turned to night
In your grave, going inside the ground
The bell chimed in a sad mourning sound

(Solo 1)

Why do you have to leave me all alone?
And my precious heart had turned to stone
The rain of blood pouring on my head
I’m going insane because you are dead

On this day, love got to bloom
To me, it was just a grief doom
People are happy while I sit and cry
Why today do have to leave me and die

(Solo 2)

My heart had changed to thorns
I’ve been ripped, I’m so torn
And I’m in the shadow I remain and fall in…
PAIN

(Solo 3)

And today it was so dark
No sunshine was on my face
When I walked in this park
Everyone’s in love and mines in Grace
Now I sit on this wooden bench and weep
And hope tomorrow will be a better day
As I will never smile to this life again

Author's Note

Enjoy :)

Reviews

[Ruth]

Brilliantly addresses the fact the not every Valentines is a happy one! Powerfully so love..as a song this could work wonders! Lyrically and poetically, but then what are lyrics if not poetry? lol

Such pain and anguish is never easy to voice, but you have done so here so well..makes the reader quite emotional taking it all on board!

Great work

xx

[massoud]

I like the poem, but i think that it is less theatrical than the other masterpieces of the same writer. Still can say:" the title is GREAT!"