Lovesong

Lovesong

A Poem by SimonitroX
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This song is about doubting life and passion in a skeptic point of view.

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It's good enough reaching the road to nowhere

We might be lost but we really shouldn't care

Will our hearts be fulfilled after the desire?

Falling so many times to life it burns us into the fire

 

Life just goes on...

No one cares

 

A person may end up being the fool

Just to realize that life could be cruel

We surrender too much for its worth

To seek the empty gift presented in forth

 

Life just goes on...

No one cares

 

(Solo)

 

There's one thing for sure

Feelings what makes us beings

Happiness is what we believe is our cure

Beyond life's image is it worth seeing

 

And life just goes on...

No one seems to care anymore

 

I feel the adoration of life

Not the name that eternity recalls

The action builds and speaks for a legacy

I don't care as long as life itself still goes on...

© 2008 SimonitroX


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oh what do i hear ,the game played with life only to end as a fool again loses,i know thats life so tricky and cheeky thats her for sure ,she will let let you play on and on,thinking you are winning ,and on your way to happiness,but no you will never win and you will never know happiness,thats her game a very hateful game...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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oh what do i hear ,the game played with life only to end as a fool again loses,i know thats life so tricky and cheeky thats her for sure ,she will let let you play on and on,thinking you are winning ,and on your way to happiness,but no you will never win and you will never know happiness,thats her game a very hateful game...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this can be something
fire.. desire... reading those two cliche rhymes killed the entire reading,
but many factors played into that before hand. the first sentence inparticular,
better check the grammar, all in all its poorly written, but
i see potential because there is a passion, but i'm pushing it a tad saying that.
i can see this really turning into some that could be great
with some real effort, good luck.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 6, 2008
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SimonitroX
SimonitroX

Beirut, Lebanon



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My name is Simon Nader. I haven't changed the "About Me" for awhile, haven't I? Since you were curious, I went to Vancouver finished what I was intended and came back to my home country, Lebanon. .. more..

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