Kissing in the rain

Listen to the sound of rain patter to the ground

Water pours from every creak and vessel

Trains roar loudly as I stand alone on the platform

Drenched in emotion I can barely see but a blurry silhouette standing before me

Laced in passion hands stretched out

Hands holding hands he spins me into the fold of his arm

Hands firmly on his chest

Our eyes meet

Hearts melt

Kissing in the rain

Author's Note

First draft please let me know what you think

Reviews

[Priyanshi]

starting with the sad scene you went on to write about the romantic moment and lovely poetry you wrote.
:)keep writing

[KCthelastboyscout]

A lovely romantic moment described in beautiful detail.feels like the end of a movie

[poetgurl]

Aw this is so wonderful and it's sincere, nicely written

[FJ Davis]

Quickly and powerfully creates the mood.
Lovely!