Waiting

Waiting,

O how long I have sat here.

Waiting,

For something to happen.

Waiting,

Life is to short.

Waiting,

The seconds tick by.

Waiting,

Long hours pass.

Waiting,

Then I realize,

What am I waiting for! 

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

I have an introsepective little story on the waiting game. You sum that up here nicely... :) =)

[Dearantlers]

I liked this one a lot! Very good!

[TheElfPrincess]

Very relatable. I actually felt like that after reading my first HP book and waiting for a letter inviting me to Hogwarts :) Thank you for another wonderful poem.

[Hyacinth]

I loved this one. It's absolutely true. You're very good at using only as many words as you need to express your self. Your poems are distilled. I like that!

[nevershoutnever.]

Yes, what are you waiting for? :) Great job!

[BrynnaW.]

I love this! How can you say that it is bad?! :)Good job! We are always waiting and waiting for something and suddenly it just hits us. I loved it! Great write! Keep on writing!

[Niki Wilson]

Haha... I love this, only time always makes me have something to happen..