Birth, Life, Death

Birth, Life, Death

Birth, Life, Death.

The three things all humans go through.

Eventually.

Whether big or small,

crazy or sane,

good or bad.

Whether you're wealthy or poor,

happy or sad.

Birth, Life, Death.

The things we all go through.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

good short free-verse going on here and has sum flow... though it seems to be alot straightforward rather than focused on emotion and thought. just maybe recommend thinking of poetry as a art (of any kind), rather than a writing piece with just rhyming words and literary elements. try to go more deep, for things that are eye-opening or emotionally motivating, that's what makes really great poetry, least from my perspective. but great poem overall, enjoyed it mate ^_^

[Kyla H]

Ha, short but true. We do all go through these things, and we as humans have no way of controlling it. Nicely done.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Good job! You wrote down the truth about everyone's outcome of life in a nice and straightforward manner.