Birth, Life, Death

Birth, Life, Death

Birth, Life, Death.

The three things all humans go through.

Eventually.

Whether big or small,

crazy or sane,

good or bad.

Whether you're wealthy or poor,

happy or sad.

Birth, Life, Death.

The things we all go through.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

good short free-verse going on here and has sum flow... though it seems to be alot straightforward rather than focused on emotion and thought. just maybe recommend thinking of poetry as a art (of any kind), rather than a writing piece with just rhyming words and literary elements. try to go more deep, for things that are eye-opening or emotionally motivating, that's what makes really great poetry, least from my perspective. but great poem overall, enjoyed it mate ^_^

[Light]

birth, life and death...i don't know about anyone else here, but i'm God. i kinda put things in motion and will be there after they end...so only "Life" really applied. this was an interesting read (from and outside perspective). the inevitable truth of life...what else really matters!? enjoyed this one

-light-

[J.Truth]

Short and honest; 'nuf said. Great job delivering it(:

[It Broke Me]

I like the emotion. The words really come alive =)

[Sukriti Suki]

Honest and to the point. Sometimes that's all that's needed.

[Steph K]

Short and sweet, amazing work!

[Blessed_Angel]

so true short sweet and lovely. Good read

[Tasha]

You are absolutely true. Great job!
♥ Ta'Shandra

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I like the subject. You've expressed your thoughts on this truth really well.

[BrynnaW.]

Very true. This was very short but entirely enjoyable. I loved it! One of your best poems along with "Life as we know it." I really like your poetry but can you write stories? :) I want to see what you can do with a story. Poems are like stories so try it. :) Good job on this though! I really liked it! Keep on writing!

[Macy A. Brown]

I like the poem. Good job on empisicing on the Birth life death parts.
overall: Great poem