Wings

Wings

A Poem by Simbles

flowing with the birds on winds through the trees 

life, moving upon existence so free,

its quite the tease

with nothing much to interrupt for instance..there isn't much friction....such limited resistance 

Confident that ill catch it when it bursts through the boundaries,

see insistence has its limits and the limitations have found me. 

Wow see 
thoughts do inhibit, take your capacity to hurt then flip it, just switch, sit it nicely, now flipped, how it sits seems so enticing

though its a tight squeeze, seems quite hot to the touch, so take your time, just sippit and allow me to see and exhibit my restraint, 

withit my progressions are now lessons learning patience 

these lessons giving me wings to flow over my life(s) canvas like an artist with a brush to paint. 

Its frightening how far from perfect you'll find me.. unless I had a dragons wings, how exciting, sometimes then you might find me lurking.. 
just below the clouds, making chains linking figure eights up and down like chained lightning, 

such a splendid joy this new found love for singing.  sing songs with whats around me with what I can hear and see as i dart up and down swinging,

bringing a happy heart is a great place to start a new beginning, 
a happy face keeps the mind in line and truly winning. 

I soundly followed proudly with a roar roared outloudly!!
So pleased with how it sounded, it boomed so loud as it rang all around then hit the ground, so amused as leaves did float up onto the breeze quite astounding, they started flying up forming perfect circles all around me 

I believe solace has found me, I am where it rests for now I thought as I did loom up above so high, 

once again I am pleased and such gratitude it brings, when this place sees fit to allow me in this space a deserved right reserved only for the might and make of kings. 

left now with no doubt in me as i am bound only to the winds, I fly through the clouds free... as i paint the sky with my wings.

© 2018 Simbles


Author's Note

Simbles
just something i whipped up :) hope you enjoy. opinions are greatly encouraged ^_^

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i like the breaks in V4 ..using points to accent them .. i like the imaging using the wind, birds and trees .. very emotive in meditative way for me .. lots of abstract meaning but for me the overall effect from this poem is that your protagonist is on the inner journey ... looking for something .. going through our human obstacles to find it ... in closing it is found .. at least for the moment .. i think the addition of the dragon is intriguing as they can represent very different things according to culture and myth ... its a bit long .. but you say a lot ... deeper meaning unnecessary for me .. i enjoyed it for the ride :)
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Simbles

4 Years Ago

For me in short lets just say, Imagine I, am a terrible painter, which i can accept, as its true xD .. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

some dragons are very powerful indeed :)



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i like the breaks in V4 ..using points to accent them .. i like the imaging using the wind, birds and trees .. very emotive in meditative way for me .. lots of abstract meaning but for me the overall effect from this poem is that your protagonist is on the inner journey ... looking for something .. going through our human obstacles to find it ... in closing it is found .. at least for the moment .. i think the addition of the dragon is intriguing as they can represent very different things according to culture and myth ... its a bit long .. but you say a lot ... deeper meaning unnecessary for me .. i enjoyed it for the ride :)
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Simbles

4 Years Ago

For me in short lets just say, Imagine I, am a terrible painter, which i can accept, as its true xD .. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

some dragons are very powerful indeed :)

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Added on March 29, 2018
Last Updated on December 25, 2018
Tags: Dragons, Nature, prolific, happy, wings, clouds, trees, positive, dreams

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Simbles
Simbles

Perth. , Streya, Australia



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