Let go

He wants

to be with

her

But he 

can't let go 

of the 

past

He wants to 

be the one

to hold 

her 

While she is 

happy

While she is 

depressed

While she is 

crying

He wants to 

hold her through

everything

But to do 

that

He has to 

let go

He must let

go of the 

past

To be with 

her

He must 

move on with 

his future 

with her

And she will wait

to be with 

him

To truly 

be with her 

She will wait

for him to give 

his heart

his whole 

heart

to her

As she has given 

her heart 

to him

Author's Note

i just wrote this last night

Reviews

[mercy party]

the poem did good at communicating being torn. torn between two. letting go is the easy part, its the reality that things are never the same. Someone here is trying while feeling sidestepped and non-exclusive. Love starts to not feel sacred, then what. Just my take,its just what the poem surfaced for me. is a really strong write!

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much for your review!

[Jade]

Wow! this is full of emotions, so nicely presented

[Coyote Poetry]

A realistic and true poem. Love can't grow in the dirt of dead earth. I like the want and honest tone of the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much for your review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Tony Jordan]

All or nothing! There is no going back now.Only a fool would try to hold back and not take that complete leap of faith - her heart in hand and make that move to bliss.
I loved this Rose.

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much! can you read and review angel of darkness? thank you!

[Tony Jordan]

ooooh dark one is it...idk ...lol
:D

[Angel of the devil]

i have recently added a new chapter to it and am still working on that chapter. lol :)

[Tony Jordan]

Added to my library Rose - I'll definitely get to it. :)

[Angel of the devil]

Thank you very much. i will be updating it as i write more on it. i hope you will like it

[Tony Jordan]

No probs Rose.
:D

[Angel of the devil]

still thank you

[DoormanDan]

Not bad. Not bad at all. I enjoyed reading this. This sounds like one heck of a complex relationship! Overall, you did a good job writing this. There is only one thing I have to point out. Look at the section below that I've put quotations around.

And she will wait
to be with
him
"To truly
be with her"
She will wait
for him to give

I think you meant to put "him" instead or "her". Other than that, I don't have anything to point out. Good job. Keep on writing! :)

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This is a deep poem about how he needs to let go of the past in order to hold her.

[Angel of the devil]

thank you for your review and for taking the time to read this

[Unknown Poet]

Reading this just made my eyes wet ... You know how much this relates to me...

[Unknown Poet]

Thanks for sharing

[Angel of the devil]

thank you for reading and reviewing this.

[YanZeros]

Beautiful! Falling in love while the other foot stayed in the past. Come one dude give yourself full to the girl! ~cheering Rose! :)

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much!

[YanZeros]

*on... You're Welcome! :D

[Angel of the devil]

:) so how are you

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes, sometimes you need to let go the past memories to light up yourl present and to sparkle the future. Nice poem!

[Angel of the devil]

thank you. i agree

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Letting go of the past is something thats not easy.. I liked the flow of your composition.☺

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Angel of the devil]

:)!!!!!!!!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This ten characters thing is really irritating 😂

[Angel of the devil]

ikr! it is so annoying. somedays i just want to scream bc of it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah ( sigh)