blood falls

as she hears 

the words 

that stab her 

heart

over and over

sharp and painful

than anything

to her

blood falls 

onto the floor

as she 

cries

her eyes 

out

blood falls 

Reviews

[Jade]

Wow, very strong write. I can feel sadness in this write,

[Coyote Poetry]

Very strong use of words. I felt the sadness and the emotions bleed in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Tony Jordan]

Tears from a place so deep down inside us that they may as well be the very crimson cells that keep us alive.
Visceral piece Rose.

[Angel of the devil]

thank you tony

[Johnny]

Yes blood and tears.. the recipe for life

[Angel of the devil]

thank you for your review

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Sad but powerful. A reality for so many. Thank you for sharing with us. ...:::)))

[Angel of the devil]

thank you so much!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....

[Angel of the devil]

i wrote this for a friend......