fall begins

Fall begins

she can smell

it in the

air

she can see

it all around

her

as the leaves 

turn colors

into beautiful

red, orange

yellow

she watches

the magic

happen

all around 

her 

the world is 

changing

the magic is 

happening

once again

fall is 

beginning

Fall begins

by:emerald dragon

pictures

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[brian]

Fall is my favorite season..particularly the middle of Fall, when all the leaves have changed colors and it is that beautiful display of oranges, yellows and soothing browns. So beautiful..so calming. You did a good job winding your poem down as if the leaves were falling down. Lyrical and 'magical'.. Thank you for sharing. (=

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much!

[Jade]

I think this is really good and I love the pictures you used.

[Angel of the devil]

thank you! i just looked up beautiful fall pictures and came up with those. thank you very much!

[Jade]

not a problem

[Tina Kline]

A very beautiful flll poem. It does just seem to happen by magic, almost over night even though you aer waiting for the season to start. Very impressive poem.

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much!

[Tina Kline]

You're most welcome.

[Angel of the devil]

i was sitting outside, looking around when i thought of writing a poem about the changing season into fall. and this is what i got

[Tina Kline]

And it is very good. I enjoyed it. I love fall/autumn. I love reading good poetry about it and yours is very good. I don't mind repeating myself here.

[Angel of the devil]

thank you very much