The first kiss

The first kiss

A Poem by Angel of the devil

The first time
they kissed

They knew
they were meant
to be 

She felt as 
she has found 
her one true
love 

she felt as 
all those years 
of feeling alone
were over 

she felt 
complete 

The first kiss
of her life

The most 
romantic 
kiss ever

The best kiss 
she had ever 
had

The first kiss

© 2016 Angel of the devil


Author's Note

Angel of the devil
i wrote this a while ago.

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your first kiss is always the best kiss,all that anticipation,finally it`s time

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

thank you for the review wordman! how are you?
 wordman

8 Years Ago

you`re welcome and i`m still kicking
Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

well, thats good, lol
your write brings back many a memories for me. enjoyable read

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

thank you oddgirl (Kelcee)
Oh gosh this is just bringing back bad memories Lol after my first kiss i definitely knew we were not meant to be :) keep up the great work Blood Rose!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

im sorry that it brings up bad memories for you lol. :) thanks and i will try by best! thank you! :).. read more
 The Realist

8 Years Ago

no not bad memories but hilarious ones. i mean we both new it would never work LMFAO he was gay sooo.. read more
Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

ah, okay. lol
Sometimes it can be so. One thing for sure - you always remember your first kiss!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

tis true. tis true
Yes that first kiss is always remembered. Nice memories thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

your welcome and thank you
A fairytale with a good ending~Nice thoughts

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

thank you!
Josie E. Cook M. A.

8 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

:), lol. how are you

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Angel of the devil
Angel of the devil

East Anglia , United Kingdom



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