Hollow, Hollow

hollow, hollow whispers

losing memories of old

spilling dangerously away

into the bitter, bitter cold

hollow, hollow desire

waiting to be claimed

open arms outstretching slowly

afraid of bitter, bitter disdain

hollow, hollow anger

misaligned values behind my eyes

bleeding tears bearing witness

to bitter, bitter lies

hollow, hollow judgement

broken record too cracked to play

petty childishness invading creation

in bitter, bitter shades of grey

hollow, hollow screaming

not certain if I'm alive

waiting impatiently for inspiration

in this bitter, bitter life

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

I find it quite interesting how you've structured this poem. I really enjoyed this poem since I can relate to it. I don't really have a favorite part, because I like all of it. Nice flow of words and diction to push the reader through and keep them captivated. Excellent work!

Chaos_Collector

[SilverTearRusted]

So glad that you enjoyed it!!

[Chaos_Collector]

Thank you for sharing this! :)