Now it is hard to find a work that takes the under belly of a tragic love and understanding, Not just hard but I am sure there are a score of Opera's to express the theme, but none can match the expression of empowerment and emotion that you have just expelled. You have hit the level of Homer himself.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Oh, wow...Thank you very much for your kind words.
A wonderfully tragic and yet romantic theme, which I am a sucker for, I fear. Your poem flows very smoothly and is graceful and clean to read. Very nice, your work is a joy to read!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you! Yes, I am a hopeless romantic. Any book or movie that has something lovely simply makes m.. read moreThank you! Yes, I am a hopeless romantic. Any book or movie that has something lovely simply makes my heart gush. However, as beautiful as this sort of situation is in stories...it's torture in reality! Haha! Once again, my reality is distorted by the novels that I devour...
The age old mythos of a secret love. I was thinking reading this I might actually fall out of love with person near the thousandth time of hearing there name whispered, I know it's a metaphor but seriously think about it. That's a whole lot a whispers. Of course I jest. Enjoyed.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Haha! Yes that would be a lot of whispers...although I was referring more to the various versions of.. read moreHaha! Yes that would be a lot of whispers...although I was referring more to the various versions of the scene. Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed.
the line 'from a distance' is like a microcosm of the whole poem's structure - each line is parsed off and the effect is one of insular isolation. The tone is stripped down, very spoken word, and is works very well with the desolate structure of each line. It's so simple but visceral. I was moved, connected to your inner life through these words.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you! It means a lot to know that something I've written can move others. I appreciate your rev.. read moreThank you! It means a lot to know that something I've written can move others. I appreciate your review.
Suxh a way to pay quick credit, I have to say your work itself is far more heavier than Marta Syrko art....
Will be back to read more of your stuff... Simply marvelous
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Wow...thank you very much. I don't feel I deserve such praise, but it certainly is appreciated. I am.. read moreWow...thank you very much. I don't feel I deserve such praise, but it certainly is appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed.
You deserve more than this my friend, what i like more about your poetry it's honest nothing fake in.. read moreYou deserve more than this my friend, what i like more about your poetry it's honest nothing fake in it. You're most welcome
10 Years Ago
Most of my poems, save for a few, were born of inner turmoil. I always feel better once I've poured .. read moreMost of my poems, save for a few, were born of inner turmoil. I always feel better once I've poured my heart out onto paper. Whenever I get stuck thinking about the same thing over and over, I write a poem to help it escape, and help me move on to other thoughts.
Thank you, again for your reviews.
10 Years Ago
I can understand my friend, writing is escape from the world and everyone around us. It's peaceful p.. read moreI can understand my friend, writing is escape from the world and everyone around us. It's peaceful process with ourown selves and our minds. I will read more of your work thank you
A child of the Living God, I incorporate my beliefs into my writing.
I am quite old-fashioned for my age, and often feel that I ought to have been born in a different era.
I am a major bibliophi.. more..