Something

Something's amiss
I just don't know what it is.
Something's wrong
Don't want to feel this for too long.

Looking at those
Lovers walk pass and pose
Holding hands, laughing loud
Hugging each other proud.

Watching old friends
Acting silly till the end
Never tired of talking
Smiling, laughing.

Something's amiss
Can't put my finger in it.
Something's wrong
For you, I long...

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Short, simple and beautiful. I like it.

[Chris38]

This was a beautiful poem with it's heart on it's sleeve.

[Poeticpiers]

elegant in its simplicity