Be Strong

Be Strong

A Poem by Kuhr Gred
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Simple but Complex

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A simple  advice

A common  syllable

A powerful  phrase

But, adorable expression

 

I  couldn’t  explain why!

I  felt  floating in the sky

I’ll  keep my eyes open

That  makes me believe

 

Your  gentle whisper

Speech about truth

I began to confuse

So, close your eyes

 

To realize,

“Every time, I feel down;

Just recall this advice”

Because my spirit flows

In you… Always 

© 2012 Kuhr Gred


Author's Note

Kuhr Gred
I hope you like.. this.. it seems.. I'm less often write poems.. ahah maybe because I'm just excited this coming first day of class in July.. ahha anyway ENJOY!.. friendship poem again :)

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My goodness your friends inspire wonderful creations from you. All have a message and are for a reason you have chosen to write for... and just where can one find friends so wonderful? I sure would love to meet one or two myself... Always love to read your inspiring poems. Thank you for the RR. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
'I began to confuse' this line confuse me just like the word. ;) hehe
anyways i really enjoyed the flow of this poem
a touch of friendship and a little bit of romantically cute.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Maybe I took something else away from this than others, but there may have been a romantic tone with this. I am more than likely wrong, but it was sort of between the lines

Posted 12 Years Ago


this poem strikes the definition of a kindred spirit, or someone held
close to heart, the meaning is carried by a romantic dream, awesome job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kuhr Gred
Kuhr Gred

Bulacan, Philippines



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Size: _FUN-SIZE Loves: _Serving my people for Christ :) Likes: _Asking her about "ICE CREAM" treats Proud to be MAPUAN and MOVER in CCC I'll be ENGINEER after 4 years and dream to be INVENTOR,.. more..

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