Silent Notes

Right music comes from right choice

In the midst of night,

 

While interpreting a music piece

I began to confuse in every staff

One chord contains one reference

One note contains one question

 

Every beat is a mystery

Every rhythm is a riddle

Every pitch is a limit

Every choice is a decision

 

The pristine music starts to flow

And the harmony starts to grow

Sometimes, I can’t identify

How it’s music speaks clearly

 

Beside me,

My sister laughed at me

She talked and gave a piece of advice

“Shin! The real pianist,

 

Shouldn’t base in dreams,

It’s a choice and a desire,

Never give up!

Take it has a challenge”

 

Let your silent notes play

Till your music never ends

Author's Note

Thanks for review! this is my second story titled "Silent Notes" but i make it poem for summarize ;).. i hope you enjoy this.. :)
and also for those really like music! like me <3

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

This was very pretty. Loved the font.. Music just speaks...sooo many different things in our lives speak through a type of music. The ocean surf...the raindrops outside the window...the wind as it blows on past..almost everything has a song. This was a beautiful piece...the time to ponder is in the stillness between measures...and the lapses for breaths.. Very light and uplifting poem/story you wrote for us to enjoy. :)

[Amata Luna]

I may not be the first one to say it but the second stanza is just great! You sure made music a real good thing to have and yes, music does a lot of good for everyone. I'm glad to see how passionate you are when it comes to that and right enough with your words, you have expressed yourself together with a good piece written well and done. :)

[Thea]

Music does so many joyful and strange things in our lives. Whenever I can't sleep at night, I will just grab my phone and listen to some music, that way, it makes me feel better after a really tiring day.
I appreciate how the words are clearly used in this poem.
It totally showed how much you value the world of music especially piano.
This is some great work.
Keep it up!
:)))

[Suditi]

I love love love the second stanza!
Its a beautiful, musical write!
My day has just started..and to read such a lovely happy poem in the morning itself, is amazing.
Thank you for sharing this. :)

[Distant horizons]

You talk of music so beautifully. Hope to hear it one day. Wonderful write.

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish I had skill for music. It is a language without words. I like the advice given in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SUGATA M]

I enjoyed reading it. The poetry has a movement that kept me alert till the end.

[Maximillion]

i love it keep writting