Silent Notes

Right music comes from right choice

In the midst of night,

 

While interpreting a music piece

I began to confuse in every staff

One chord contains one reference

One note contains one question

 

Every beat is a mystery

Every rhythm is a riddle

Every pitch is a limit

Every choice is a decision

 

The pristine music starts to flow

And the harmony starts to grow

Sometimes, I can’t identify

How it’s music speaks clearly

 

Beside me,

My sister laughed at me

She talked and gave a piece of advice

“Shin! The real pianist,

 

Shouldn’t base in dreams,

It’s a choice and a desire,

Never give up!

Take it has a challenge”

 

Let your silent notes play

Till your music never ends

Author's Note

Thanks for review! this is my second story titled "Silent Notes" but i make it poem for summarize ;).. i hope you enjoy this.. :)
and also for those really like music! like me <3

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

This was very pretty. Loved the font.. Music just speaks...sooo many different things in our lives speak through a type of music. The ocean surf...the raindrops outside the window...the wind as it blows on past..almost everything has a song. This was a beautiful piece...the time to ponder is in the stillness between measures...and the lapses for breaths.. Very light and uplifting poem/story you wrote for us to enjoy. :)

[Guitar Heroine]

un oh! haha, jamming lang katapat nyan :D

[Kuhr Gred]

hahaha.. sabi ko na eh.. magugustuhan mo eh :)

[Guitar Heroine]

haha! di ko prin naman nbasa ung iba eh. one at a time ;)

[Kuhr Gred]

hahaha.. paisa isa ka nga eh.. dapat isang bagsakan lang :) para masaya :D

This is so amazing! I really enjoyed reading it.
"let your silent notes play
Till your music never ends"
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Mak Goalie]

Let your silent notes play

Till your music never ends

i wish i can have ds in my life................

[Pax]

nice song or poem, music is part of our emotions its takes us into a journey of creation. one thing though this stanza bother me 'Take it has a challenge' maybe its something like this 'Take it, has a challenge' or 'Take it as a challenge'

anyways its really good.

[Jed Sabffle]

a good comparison between life and music.
the poem has a good rhythm.. :)

keep writing. :D

[emman]

A true artist! :)

[Desmund Tiny]

THis one is really good...it reminds me of the quote
" Our life is like MUSIC, it goes into many surprising and unexpected ways"

That was my motto after listening to Jpop...wahahahahah

[luna11]

I love it
"Every beat is a mystery
Every rhythm is a riddle
Every pitch is a limit
Every choice is a decision"
Amazing!!
Very well written
xx

[Wondering Mind]

Lovely!! I always think in music and feel in songs....Even when I'm asleep, may be.
It never ceases to amaze me how a set of individual notes can be composed in such infinite beauty, much like letters of an alphabet composing abundant poetic beauty and meaning..