Sketch Book

Imagination builds figures, even my reflection

One shivering morning,

 

I was seated along the bench of memories

Holding a sketch book to create a masterpiece

I turned the pages to start an outline

For a collection of my life experience

 

I draft the pattern in every shape and sizes

Shaded with pencil of desire

Then, I added some straight and curve lines

For a place of a perfect scene

 

Until, I finished the first chapter

I erase some line of impossibilities

By an eraser of determination

And polished with pen of love

 

“But something is missing” I said

So I decided to put a color of smiles

With tint of light-colors sunshine

And combine with dark-colors in other side

 

Has I complete my masterpiece

I felt the joy, I never felt before

A worthless gift can’t be change

A memories can’t replace anymore

 

Through last pages of my sketch book
Forever. .

Author's Note

Thanks for review! Actually, This is a short story titled "My sketch book pages", but due to busy days! i decided to made it poem for summarize!

Reviews

[Thea]

I'm giving you a constructive review from now on! :p
First of all, this was amazing and quite inspirational. The message behind those simple words was really fantastic. You've written this nicely.
I think it has a deeper message when it comes to our lives.
:)))

[MoriartyMesa]

This reminds me of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Dsz4dB6DuM

very Elanor Rigby.

[Amata Luna]

Nice. Behind messages and words, I can feel a deeper meaning with each lines. Thanks for sharing. :)

[flyingdreams]

All that matters of a thing is our memory of it. Good work.

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully described. Bright and positive read.

[Poppie Mira]

nice, this happens to me too!!!

[Desmund Tiny]

naks.... =D hehehehehe =3 (~^3^~)

[Stefan224]

i like it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sketch book are nice. Allow you to see your journey and figure where you are. I enjoyed your thoughts and the positive and strong ending. Time and life teaches us wisdom. We learn what to keep and what to toss away. Than you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Suditi]

Awwww
This is by far the cutest thing I have read in your collection!
And i have read lots of your amazing poems.
This poem is so vibrant! So happy!
And the fact that you have included the dark colors too, makes it perfect and real.
Keep it up :)