Our World's Cry

Let's hear, our world crying for justice

Help! My children are on the war

Help! MY atmosphere becomes warmer

Help! My nature was on destruction

Help! My riches slowly disappeared

 

I feel down in your selfish ambition

Your prestigious dream to come greatest

Your desire to get all things

Your promises becomes meaningless

 

There foolish act

Makes me cry deep in my heart

I almost gave them guide

But, No one listen

 

I almost sacrifice everything

To show you, How important you’re!

I trust you, To take care our home

But, Everything is change

 

Because your ambitious mind

Your character was poisoned

Because you’re hunger for power

You became tyrant to your people

 

Is this all my fault?

Why I’m suffering in this event?

Should I need to kneel  down

To shout it loud how hard it is?

 

How long will they act like this?

Until  there is no time?

Until  no one survive?

Until everything is destroyed?

 

Where is Justice?

They’re sleeping

Where is Freedom?

It was prisoned

 

I can’t ignore the fact

You forgot all reminiscence

Started has humble being

But now! It was broken

 

If only,

I could reach my voice to the past

And whisper in your ears

Maybe we will have one desire

That will never fade to unity

 

If only, there is a way!

And Hoping for a change

Maybe we will lived peacefully

With Love and Unity

Forever. . .

Author's Note

I became inspired in my college course! that's why I created this poem and I'm concern in our world's crying for fairness of justice in every nations! Thanks again.. I hope you like this! Everyone is involve, even me! :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poem tell a true story. Each day plant or animal become extinct. No=one seem to care. Old wise Native American saying. "When the wolf and bear is gone. Man will be next." I hope we gain wisdom before it is too late. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem. I wish for the sake of all children. We stop the waste of nature resource and the madness.
Coyote

[Thea]

The message was great and I'm glad that you got such inspiration...
You just have to work on some errors there...
Like this...
"How long they act like this?" seems incorrect.
I guess "How long will they act like this?" sounds much better...
But apart from that, a good write...
I'm still giving you a full rate. :p
:)))

[Suditi]

Such a noble thought!
A thought provoking write. :)
I also love the fact that you have ended the poem with hope..for a better future.
Great work. :)

[Desmund Tiny]

naspeechless ako teh di ko kasi alam ang sasabihin pero great work......

[Amata Luna]

Truly, the world cries out for justice and freedom. Justice from iniquity and freedom from being captive with the wrong things for a long time. You've made your point well in this poem. And I love the compassionate air that you have with it. Keep it moving for this is good. :)