Intimate Friend

A souvenir of the past

Holding on One's desire

The truth seekers of life

Through thousand miles

I call to my mind

All joyous reminiscence

Flows from my spirit

You will be my inspiration 

Even you're not by side

I'm ready to give my hand

In any game we move

Running to finish line

And I'll wait the day

Till we meet again!

Author's Note

Thanks for review! I hope you like this.. I made this for my beloved friend because you're one of my inspiration ;)

Reviews

[Becky]

I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.

Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Entrancing sentimental piece of writing.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a nice emotional poem. Yes, people do build meaningful friendships along the way (:

[Sid]

Good write, though the font size really threw me off, the message in your poem is very nice and the poem itself is well written...good write!!

[Kyle Sky]

Good work. I didnt like the structure of the verse, it made it unattractive when recited aloud. The message and theme of the poem was very attractive though.

[AsTheKissIgnites]

i like the message of the poem, but the font is wee bit off.. :D but oh well its great.. , great work, mate.

-Conie (from Tanauan, Batangas Philippines)

neng galing mong magsulat :P xoxo

[ewest1220]

Large font was a bit of a turn off however the content itself was very well written. Very kind hearted and heartfelt great job!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Loved the phrase "you will be my inspiration, even you're not by 'my' side"
Nice little piece and as it is for a real person all the more poignant!

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Lovely poem of upbeat emotion :)