Intimate Friend
A Poem by
Kuhr Gred
A souvenir of the past Holding on One's desire
The truth seekers of life
Through thousand miles
I call to my mind
All joyous reminiscence
Flows from my spirit
You will be my inspiration
Even you're not by side
I'm ready to give my hand
In any game we move
Running to finish line
And I'll wait the day
Till we meet again!
© 2012 Kuhr Gred
Author's Note
Thanks for review! I hope you like this.. I made this for my beloved friend because you're one of my inspiration ;)
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I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.
Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Entrancing sentimental piece of writing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Entrancing sentimental piece of writing.
A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)
This is a nice emotional poem. Yes, people do build meaningful friendships along the way (:
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is a nice emotional poem. Yes, people do build meaningful friendships along the way (:
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good write, though the font size really threw me off, the message in your poem is very nice and the poem itself is well written...good write!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Good write, though the font size really threw me off, the message in your poem is very nice and the poem itself is well written...good write!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good work. I didnt like the structure of the verse, it made it unattractive when recited aloud. The message and theme of the poem was very attractive though.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Good work. I didnt like the structure of the verse, it made it unattractive when recited aloud. The message and theme of the poem was very attractive though.
i like the message of the poem, but the font is wee bit off.. :D but oh well its great.. , great work, mate.
-Conie (from Tanauan, Batangas Philippines)
neng galing mong magsulat :P xoxo
Posted 12 Years Ago
i like the message of the poem, but the font is wee bit off.. :D but oh well its great.. , great work, mate.
-Conie (from Tanauan, Batangas Philippines)
neng galing mong magsulat :P xoxo
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Large font was a bit of a turn off however the content itself was very well written. Very kind hearted and heartfelt great job!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Large font was a bit of a turn off however the content itself was very well written. Very kind hearted and heartfelt great job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Loved the phrase "you will be my inspiration, even you're not by 'my' side"
Nice little piece and as it is for a real person all the more poignant!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Loved the phrase "you will be my inspiration, even you're not by 'my' side"
Nice little piece and as it is for a real person all the more poignant!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Lovely poem of upbeat emotion :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Lovely poem of upbeat emotion :)
I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.
Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.
Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Kuhr Gred Bulacan, Philippines
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Likes: _Asking her about "ICE CREAM" treats
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