Coffee Break

just for fun :)

The Calm of sweet aroma

The golden beans roasted on fire

The tickle of honey essence

Pour in relaxing cup

Blend with creamer

Blend with sugar

Blend with love

Sprinkle with cinnamon

And stir with slow dance

Perfectly made just for you

Author's Note

just for fun... :) i like coffee... XD

Reviews

[SUGATA M]

I simply love it

[Amata Luna]

Wow Kuhr, so you love coffee? I love it too. :)) This coffee of yours is made sweet and cute. Your words are just flowing. Love the way everything brought it to. Nice write. Coffee more! :D

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

If I wasn't about to explode because of an indulgence on a bag of pods I'd be making myself a cup of coffee :P This is a really great poem, it puts for the image and motion of coffee being made. I love the "and stir with a slow dance" it's catching. good job, keep it up!! (:

[MoriartyMesa]

To be honest I am not much of a coffee drinker, but you may have given me second thoughts.


Nice job KG

[Shy Girl]

Loved it!!! :) I love coffee ice cream too...it has that thickened coffee texture to it and of course that wonderful coffee essence... love this poem and can taste that brew at the the moment.

[Suditi]

And i love your poetry!
Its so simple, yet so much fun!
A superb write. :)

[tk]

..and now, just by reading this piece, i suddenly crave for a cup of coffee. :)
you've done a great job on this! simply written yet enjoying to read. ^_^
BTW, i miss you!!

[TheCreativityItself]

My first cup of coffee was bitter, hope the next one is as sweet as yours.

I like the coffee blended with love!

[Thea]

I hate coffees but anyway, this was great...
:)))

[Jed Sabffle]

simple but brilliant! :)
Coffee blended with love. I guess that's the sweetest coffee ever. :D
highly-commendable poem. :))