Windchime

A morning of full excitement

A figment of gray matter

The curiosity speaks

Every time, I heard a sound

The sea breeze play

Sound for a pleasure

Every dew drops counts

Flash back episodes move

The expressions of heart

Calling for evidence

To reveal a puzzle

How it works

And now, Has I looked up

A sea breeze play

For a sweet beats

That remarks in my heart

Author's Note

:) my first prose.. hey! i did my best to complete this poem (prose) ;D it is ok if you don't like it.. :D but for me this a masterpiece :D

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Certainly 'expressions of the heart' and musical beats throught this beautiful write.

[MoriartyMesa]

Grey matter sticks out the most to me for one reason or another, one not stronger than the other. Just curious on that pairing of words, so now I am thinking. Which is what you want all your readers to be doing. Hope to see more clues to come.

[Suditi]

This is refreshing. It is a masterpiece in its own unique way!
Keep it up. :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Lots of interesting language here, has an unusual feeling, original.Well done.