Tune Hearts

my first poem i made.. :)

I feel the tones

For every notes

I tip tap toe

For every chords

I want to hear your voice

That I can play with keys of Love

For Continuous melodies

Flows on me

As my heart beats

Your tune creates

In every string, vibrates

For a sweet sound

As I play it with love

I feel my heart sing

And now, it is on tune

Cause' we are Tune Hearts

Author's Note

this my first time.. i hope you like this.. I'm only a beginner writer :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the use of music to make the description come alive. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Amata Luna]

Another poem. Another love. Another hobby. Another part. Every poem you make is a bit of you Kuhr, and though they may seem simple the message that lies within are always something that makes me smile. Nakanang! Eh di ikaw na mahilig sa music!!! whahaha. But to be honest, you've done well here. ;)

This is really sweet and cute :) It made me smile... Thank you for sharing :)

[Pax]

beautifully written. so this is your first poem. it is nicely written. i think its inspired in while playing the guitar.

[Celeste]

This was a nice read for me. It's not so bad for your first poem or so! But you've improved so much, definitely.

Great job. Keep writing!

[emman]

Simple yet to be admired :)

[Supernova]

Very beautiful. Reflects love in it's purest form. Nicely penned ! :)

[dan nacario]

for a beginner this is an amazing write..keep it up.

[Jed Sabffle]

Well, it's nice for a beginner. :)
I enjoyed it because I like music very much!
I also like the romantic flow of words. :D
Just one thing, I am looking for a little more "cutting edge"
that would captivate my eyes.
But overall this is great! You're very creative in writing your poem!
Keep writing! :))

[Thea]

Good poem...I won't state any negative or positive comment on this one...But my advice, keep on writing and I'm sure you'll get better...Anyway, this was nicely written...Reminds me of the piano...
:)))