Death by Suicide

A flash of silver,
A parting of flesh,
Wincing pain,
And slow flow of life.
Calm is everlasting.
Can you feel it?
Can you see it?
Like a ribbon of white lace,
Death….

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Dark but good...:).........

[Constance L. Hartwell]

As depressing as this poem was, I still enjoyed reading. I though about fish as I read it... weird. kudos nonetheless