Flame-less Love

The first poem I have created in years. I guess hurtful words aren't the worst thing that can come out of a person's mouth.

For so long I believed that from out of your mouth,

love and sweetness would come, though it went south.

But on that day I wished the worst it would be,

was a few hurtful words you would spit out at me.

I was just laying there, enjoying the bliss

Wrapped up in the aftermath of your bitter sweet kiss.

Then in through the door your body did storm,

On your face was a look that took all my warm.

As I waited for your vile words to spew,

I wish I had known what you were planing to do.

After you unleashed all the demons you were holding in,

I understood for sure our love would never win.

Instead of words hurtled at me with your rage,

Out came a liquid you had filled in the cage.

At first I was confused at the water covering me

Until I smelt the odor and wondered what it could be.

As the familiar alcohol smell rushed up through the air

An evil grin came to his face that gave me such a scare.

I was taken back, my brain was screaming its all lies.

from his pocked the flame flickered, lighting up his eyes.

Author's Note

I'm a little rusty, but I always enjoy reviews.

Reviews

[JustaManWithaPen]

Fantastic job telling the story and the imagery was spot on it flowed out smoothly keep it up!