Maybe I...... Love(d) You(him)(her)?

Eyes linger forth the vestibule,
catching glimpses of light in the darks
of their eyes,
the hearts puffing smoke around them
simmer and sift away with dawn
arising from the signs
of breaking hearts

your hands you gave to the bank teller
while these eyes keep watching you.
catch you by surprise again and again
until you wait for the sun
to take you away from the hands
away from these eyes
and away from all
you thought was true.
maybe I....
maybe I....
love.

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful. Vivid and sharp.

[Kristine Ferg]

Thank you!