I'll Follow You.

Ripped by a breath--

run me down by your cheek;

Kiss the feathers by the house

that you once

disappointed me.

 

 

Break free. Break free… on me.

Tell about your dreams,

the odds, the wonders…

 

 

And edge along.

Tear me slow,

Tear me slower.

 

 

 

 

 

 

when my body hungers.

 

 

 

 

None to know.

 

 

Brace for retraction

as the hazy lines go.

 

 

And I’ll follow.

 

I’ll follow you.

Reviews

[PhoenixDown]

Awesome flow with a gentle, reassuring grip.
This felt like rolling down a sloping hill,
or like a sleigh ride, even enjoyable on a frigid day.

[Kristine Ferg]

Thank you! :)