If I Remembered

If I Remembered

A Poem by silently leathel
"

If I remembered you, I wouldn't feel as guilty.

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 Your my oldest brother.
Of course I want to meet you.
I know I meet you when I was younger.
But I don't remember you.
Maybe if you weren't drunk that one night.
You would be right next to me.
I'm not blaming you.
Sorry if it seems that way.
I just miss you.
I feel guilty.
That I don't remember you.
I love you.
And I want to say it in person.
Not in prayers every night.
But just one time.
One time in person I would feel better.

© 2010 silently leathel


Author's Note

silently leathel
I love you big brother R.I.P. <3<3<3

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Im sorry about you loss! this was a great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


what a powerful poem. some mistakes though, your is you're and meet is met
R.I.P

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 30, 2010
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silently leathel
silently leathel

Willits, CA



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Well my names Lacy im 16 years young & I love writing poems & stories. Some people say I'm a good writer or have goodideas. I may 'cuss' in my writing mainly my poems but its just my deep emotion & h.. more..

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