Being Cool

Being cool must be the best thing!!! Right???

 It must be the best thing.

Being the coolest person.

Right?

I mean you can do what ever you want to anyone. 

And you'll have your followers right next to you.

Well is it so cool when the one kid is in the newspaper.

He was so humiliated and ashamed of himself.

He couldn't take life no more.

But you're still cool.

Right?

Good for you.

Good for you, for fitting in.

And for getting rid of that 'loser.'

That's pretty much what you wanted.

Maybe him not dieing, but him being the most hated kid at the school.

Good for you.

Reviews

[EMF]

The theme and the way it's handled make this poem really strong. It has a deep growl to it I like. A few typo's, but who cares. That's what pedantic old git's like me are for. I like the flow. The language may need a little tidy, but that's up to you. As it stands it has an energy and clout missing from so much of the fluffy tripe on WC.
You impress

[Ron]

Lacy this is good cutting work. The theme that Coolness is just shallow celebrity is very strong. It is good that you are perceptive enough to see it as it is! Cool equals Vile! Much better have brains, people are really happy when good brain meets good brain. So there is every hope for you. Keep reading and keep writing!

[Lilly Negoi]

ouch...this hurts pretty much - i think this is one of the current teenage generation's dramas - being "cool"...nice way of presenting it!

[Im His Daughter]

Wowo this is powerful!! Awesome job!

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

Wow; Brutaly honest.
A wonderful && Powerful peice.
Great Write.