Faceless

A Short Poem I wrote!!

FACELESS

 

I’m Motherless

I’m shameless

I’m Nameless

What can I call myself?

 

 Life is an open road

Life is a narrow road

Life is a bumpy road

Which one do I take?

 

He hates me

She dislikes me

They all discourage me

What can I do?

 

To get their trust

To get their love

To get their encouragement

What will I do?

 

They say I’m nothing

They say I’ll never make it

They say no one will love me

 What’s the solution?

 

I’m motherless

I’m nameless

 No one care

And most of all I’m faceless

 

                         

Author's Note

I hope you all enjoy this. Plz leave a review

Reviews

[wyrd]

You end each verse with a question except the last, not the strongest last line you could go with I think. Motherless and nameless these are qualities that others give or take, shame is a quality one has or discards for ones self so seems not quite to fit with the overall theme of your poem.
I enjoy your themes and your approach to your poetry

[Coyote Poetry]

"I’m motherless
I’m nameless
No one care
And most of all I’m faceless"
Would be terrible to be invisible to the world. Poem create a vision of real sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

I really like this one. You wrote it quite well and it kind of captivates the reader in the lines. Good job :)

[Susanna F]

Short but powerful. As a stepchild myself, I can relate to some of the emotions. As a parent, I can feel only anger toward anyone discouraging a child in life. Very well written.

[Aka_Kitsune]

very nice writing, i love this piece draws me in more with each stanza. Very well done,

[just is]

Wow love this piece, love the powerful words/inspiring words.
I really enjoyed the 2nd stanza the most. This is wonderful.

[devon]

This is so beautifully written.

You have a true talent for writing, and I urge you to carry on! :)

[gman]

i like it. it reminds me of the song a man alone by finch different words but simular concept