You end each verse with a question except the last, not the strongest last line you could go with I think. Motherless and nameless these are qualities that others give or take, shame is a quality one has or discards for ones self so seems not quite to fit with the overall theme of your poem.
I enjoy your themes and your approach to your poetry
Powerful use of words and emotions! The tone of this is so forceful yet vulnerable and I really appreciate it. It rings true of some encounters we can have with other people who feel the need to judge us out of their own insecurities. Very nicely done.
Make your own road...sure, it'll be tough, but it's worth it. Great piece, I really enjoyed, " Life is an open road, life is a narrow road; life is a bumpy road." The flow really works.
I agree with the previous review on the last line thing, though I thought it was a pretty great write otherwise! Great job letting the reader connect with your emotions. Very deep. I enjoyed reading this!
A strong emotion of sadness ... and more precisely frustration is displayed in this in very elegant manner. I like the way you put forward the question. The ending could have been more powerful like the start and the mid way. Very nice poem :-)
MY PERSONAL QUOTE:
"I hate to write with pencil, cuz a few years from now my words will fade, I hate to write pen, cuz a few years from now my words will be blurry So I Write with my Heart beca.. more..