Like I'm Venom

A Short Poem I wrote while crying my eyes out after a terrible situation that had happen=)

Like I'm  Venom

Dissolving my soul into darkness

As i whimper for hope

Dissolving my heart into shame

As I scream for love

Dissolving my mind into a lost dessert

As I claim for you to listen to my dreams

Dissolving my personality into invisible

Like the air that's never seen

Dissolving my  words into nothing

As I try to reach others with a gentle small

Dissolving  me into toxic

Like I'm a venom

Never to be seen or tasted!

 

Author's Note

A Poem I wrote while crying my eyes out!!!!

Reviews

[Lovely Soul]

deep and emotional

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Venom is toxic... but pouring your heart into this piece is well expressed! Keep going...the release will be the best medicine for the Venom. Nice write!

[Blacke Hennessey]

cool poem

[Eagle Cruagh]

A beautiful poem and not really
venomous at all.
You sou;nd like a sweet girl who
has been abused.
God bless.
---- John

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. A lot of hidden story in the words. The statements were direct and honest. I enjoyed the complete poem. The ending made this poem complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kyle]

This was easy to read and to experience....i like the common way you start each thought.....

[just is]

Oh i am so sorry, i like the write though!

[gman]

a powerful poem full of emotion, love it especially the last 3 lines