Spattering Emotions

A Poem about Emotions

 

Spattering Emotions:

 

My emotions are in turmoil.

 

Running into nowhere.

 

Striving for destiny.

 

What cannot be seems to be fine.

 

Emotions fly everywhere.

 

Destroying my inner beauty.

 

They hurt the one I love.

 

They hurt my friends.

 

They hurt my family.

 

Most of all, it breaks my heart.

 

So sensual and convincing.

 

I hate them.

 

They erupt

 

They danger

I hate my spattering emotions

 

Author's Note

Please Read & Tell Me What You All Think=)

Reviews

[just is]

Yeah emotions will trigger you deep like that.
I hate that when it happens. Well expressed and written.
Like your style!

[Rae Emeral]

This is a great write! I hate my emotions at times too, but without them there would be no joy either. So I guess I have a love/hate relationship with my emotions... but would be unable to have that kind of relationship with anything if it weren't for my emotions. Haha. This poem has evoked a lot of thought. Awesome poem. :)
~Rae

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Emotions can cause a swirl of chaos...It can throw you in a storm of hurt... facing the storm can be therapeutic. This is well expressed. Nice write.

[22Tori99]

Beautiful!

[Emrick]

Thats true.i hate mines too.

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

This is deep, heartfelt and relatable. It also allows the reader to catch a glipse into this spattering of emotions you are writing about. Excellent Job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry. The powerful words took me into the emotion and the desire of the words. Your description and use of language gave life to your words. Thank you for the excellent poem. Welcome to the site.
Coyote