watercolors

 

watercolors
(Tumbling Tercets)



expanses… a dipp’d canvas
and bristles soaked in sighs
…drawing blue from the corners

and the stillness of white,
to layer the earth with silence
rich enough to get lost in

while wandering through shades
of green and the whispers of those
with color still on their fingers

© 2009 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 1/23/09

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

your endearing expression is truly a watercolor work of art, I find my self desiring the loveliness you paint
across the readers heart, the actual form and dynamics compell the cause with the right balance of
detail and effect, tumbling tercets set lyricallyto the rhythm of beauty and gentleness. metaphorically
ambitious sentiment of craftiness, o be honest,reading you feels like a dream.

[Butch Decatoria]

Wow, amazing poem. Felt the imagery like the water colors itself, beautiful.

[SilentDream]

Thank you very much. =)

[Everett DeValle]

I had to come by, just to read your words...a lovely poem indeed. Thank you for sharing.

[TL Boehm]

exquisite imagery in this one. I love paint....the tactile qualities of it. Nicely done.

[An owl on the moon]

Watercolors carry such a softness, as does your beautiful passage. One can feel the colors stirred and still on the canvass as it comes to life around us. Wonderful words...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such an eloquent description of Getting lost in the wonders of Mother Earth, a short but breathtaking write.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is truly lovely, your words as beautiful as brushstrokes on canvas.

[Aliceanne Pellegrino-He..]

What a lovely picture you have created in your write here. Filled with depth for one's imagination to unfold while reading. Thanks for sharing .. hugs and love .. Aliceanne

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

You have painted a word picture here. Good Job.