distill'd

distill'd

A Poem by SilentDream
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Written for The Pagemaster's Challenge #11 Inspired by William Shakespeare's Sonnet 5

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“But flowers distill’d, though they with winter meet,

Leese but their show; their substance still lives sweet.”

~ William Shakespeare (Sonnet 5)

 

 

 

my Love, while pent in dark and hollowed halls

away and far beyond our blended verse~

where sullen glares demand a silenced quill

instead of beauty, scrawling speech so terse;

an essence lost is not an option, Love

of yours nor mine, unspoken words assure

a comfort find and garner strength in troves,

for none removes our vested dreams of more.

essential truths within our hearts incite,

inspiring whispers, casting doubt aside.

a purer sweetness wafts and reaches you,

for tested love surpasses love untried.

          a silence lingers over pages shorn

          but none touches words of quintessence borne




Written for
The Pagemaster's Challenge #11
Inspired by William Shakespeare's Sonnet 5


© 2009 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 1/17/09

© 2009 SilentDream


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You words are beautifully extravagant... such wondrous whispers of the sweet sonnet... and there is something that pulls one into this place... and makes them want to stay forever...

Posted 9 Years Ago


SilentDream

9 Years Ago

Wow... Thank you so much for your kind review :-)
for tested love surpasses love untried.
          a silence lingers over pages shorn
          but none touches words of quintessence borne


Neatly Writen piece and above verses felt deeply in heart...good job my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautifully written Zsanece...I remember studying Shakespeare in High School, brought back memories...you always inspire me Zsanece with your wonderful poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


yah neh... graety piece.... now i remember why i love poetry.... thank you


Posted 15 Years Ago


Now that's what I call a great sonnet!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Perfect! A brilliant answer to the challenge.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a superb piece of work. You did the challenge proud. It has wonderful flow and tempo. I especially like the last two lines. Well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it flows in rills of pictured feeling and shows the Bard yet lives

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What pleases me always is a poet who can write a proper sonnet. You are one of them!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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SilentDream
SilentDream

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Zsanece Brown was born in Baltimore, Maryland, in 1976. Much of her poetry is inspired by dreams and love, longing and the comfort found in silence. Her work has often been described as bordering on t.. more..

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