Intensity Abloom

written for Toonersworld Picture, Word and Quotes That Inspire Challenges

 

The lines that stood out for me were:

take away this dark demon inside...
so that I may see the beauty...


And my response:

Intensity Abloom


the sound of hope so cruelly pierced
left overwrought and pained

drawn to arms still reaching out
facing darkness fanged

but sense ‘neath low and trembling growls
a notion to compose

and find intensity abloom
presents a perfumed rose



Written for Toonersworld Word Challenge
Using the words:

presents – notion – overwrought – sense –
low – sound – intensity - reaching


Written for Toonersworld Picture Challenge

and

Written for Toonersworld Quotes That Inspire Challenge
Responding to chosen lines from DeziredDream’s  "Come to Me"



© 2008 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 9/20/08

Author's Note

Quotes That Inspire ~ choose your favorite lines from the given poem and write a poem in response to those lines

Reviews

[Constance]

What a way to meet a challenge. Eloquent though concise, and beautifully penned.
Intensity abloom can also raise thorns. Careful. :)