Pour Moonlight Into My Dreams

Pour Moonlight
Into My Dreams
(Tumbling Tercets)


whispers of my heart are
embedded in your sighs.
a tapestry of love threaded

with promises and verses,
pouring moonlight into
my dreams of dappled warmth

and mournful willows.
confused, I wake. swaying,
as light weeps and sorrow glows.

Written for a Word Challenge

Using the words:

heart - warmth - confused - tapestry -
moonlight - willows - weeps - swaying



© 2008 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 8/28/08

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Effortless Zsanesce...I learned so much from you...I missed those days...you always inspire me.

[Michael X]

breathless elegance, the believer's dream, rapturing emotions surrendered as a moonbeam whisper,
romantic heights, a love that dwells in the ethereal, brought forth through surrender, to imagine
a flowing tapestry is spellbound, to render a sigh that could warm an angels heart, as to picture
willows in the wind, and how the move with graceful sparkle like the stars in a lovers passionate eyes,
you capture a blissful grace that defines poetry in all its gloriousness, pure, true beauty

[lauren emily]

This is beautifully written. Keep up the great work!
~Lauren

[Adela Muresan]

I really like the speech flowers, so delicate in a poetic kind of way.
The twist was unexpected and very well penned.
Great great job.

A.M.