The Sound of Blue

The Sound of Blue

(Tumbling Tercets)



the soulful blending of verse
mixed with glances, melodious…
strumming my mind with fingertips

dipped in blue, whispering breeze;
immersing in words exhaled,
unaware you were steadily drifting

away from me… but the sound is
ever clear and ever true ; and here
upon the page, I find your likeness

and it was a good line ~
guitar in the distance… besides,
I liked his melodies dipped in blue






 

Written for Tovli’s AnyFORM Goes Challenge
Using the phrase: It was a good line – guitar in the distance…
besides, I liked his melodies



1/29/08

 

 

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Reviews

[Gandré]

this was wonderful. i adored your imaginary and the blueness...hmmm sound and colors...that's something intensely genuine.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

" melodies dipped in blue" Because I never could forget you. I do not know if that is where it was headed. But I like the subtle leading in the poem to understand that there is someone special in mind. I like the color and emotion of this piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Adela Muresan]

Beautiful.

Love and music mix together in harmony. It's like melody lifts out from the page :) .

Nice font selection.

A.M.