in silence... (Submersion)

Written for Toonersworld Quotes That Inspire Challenge and Picture Challenge

Quotes That Inspire Challenge: Choose your favorite 2-4 lines and write a poem in response to those lines. Murder My Heart ~by Zanno Murder my heart with silence Drown my soul with sadness Numb my mind with wine Cover my body in tears Embrace my heart with love Speak to my soul with passion Share theese thoughts with me Hold me in your arms forever Murder my heart with regret Cry for my soul in secret Clear my mind of thoughts Cover my body with kisses Handle my heart with caution Handle my heart with care I accept you for who you are With arms and mind wide open

The lines that stood out for me were: Drown my soul with sadness …Cover my body in tears And my response: in silence… (Submersion) A wade in the shallows of memory gives instance, longing immersion in silence… adrift and buoyant For therein, a peaceful exhaling… a trembling gone quite unnoticed emanates, rippling the surface And lo, glimpse a face in repose… hearing nothing, e’en whispers of gray A solace found in submersion Written for Toonersworld Picture Challenge and Written for Toonersworld Quotes That Inspire Challenge ~ choosing lines from Zanno's "Murder My Heart" ~ © 2008 SilentDream (All rights reserved) 5/02/08

Reviews

[Gandré]

this is such a style... of semi-darkness what you write......I felt like being a part of a dream and being wrapped into dark shaddow and immobile emotions....they just were heavy sitting on my chest...in fact, they sat deep in my heart concave. loved it.