brilliance

Written for a picture challenge

brilliance

 

I’ve been comfortable with muted days,

shades of cream and sepia ombré.

Memories fade, organically shifting.

Details lost.  An essence remains.

And I’m drawn to blurred watercolors,

muddled blues and whispers of sage.

But I long for the pause and the sigh       

after tasting the brilliance of promise.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I really enjoyed this little poem. You brought me watercolours which I love, I can imagine looking at those muddled blues and whispers of sage, and then standing back, pausing and admiring the sheer talent. Nicely penned Silent Dream.

Chris

[SilentDream]

I appreciate your reading and your kind review =)

[LitStar]

best way to describe this piece is that it resembles a literary water paint

I enjoyed it

[SilentDream]

Honestly that's my favorite result. Thank you!

[Everett DeValle]

Sepia ombré...Awesome....the poem is tremendously awe inspiring...sorry, too many twenty dollar words...your poem is awesome sauce. :)

[SilentDream]

Thanks, Ev. I always appreciate your words =)
I'm trying to tap back into my creative communities. Missed you.

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome...I've missed you, as well. :)

[wordman]

such wonderful metaphors and brilliant imagery

[SilentDream]

Thank you very much for your review and kind words!