Thinking...

Thinking...

A Poem by Siena - Silent Awakenings.
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Exploring the Unknown.

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What if Dogs weren't greedy.
Beggars weren't needy?

What if everything came with a kiss?

What if Cheaters didn't cheat.
Children were neat?

What if everything did come with a hiss?

What if lies simply died out.
Whispers were no more than shouts?

What if everything we touched turned to stone?
Well I'll ask you now... Would you be alone?

© 2011 Siena - Silent Awakenings.


Author's Note

Siena - Silent Awakenings.
I wonder... Would you survive? In the reversed life of the one in which we live in.

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nice idea! Got me thinking, and I laughed at the bit about children being neat. Great poem, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha, nice poem! It got me thinking... i'd love a life that comes with kisses and love,without lies and only the good... but that can only be a dream..unfortunately. well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 21, 2011
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Siena - Silent Awakenings.
Siena - Silent Awakenings.

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